It is a well-established fact that every human being needs some relaxing time and it completely depends on individuals how they would like to spend their leisure time. Few might argue that reading and solving puzzles could be the best way and others suggest that resting on the couch or watching movies can ease out the pressure from work. In my opinion, personal leisure time should be spending on doing some valuable activities, which is entertaining and yet relaxing.
Solving puzzles might help to expand both memory and brain strength of any person and it might assist in achieving new heights in one's career. Reading has been one of the favorite pursuits for humans and it will help to bring out the creative mindset. Despite the fact that mental activities could help to improve the strength of the brain, the brain is still functioning at lower capacity, which might be an indirect work pressure.
On the flip side, resting the mind with other activities such as watching movies, browsing the internet or having a good sleep could refresh our brains and it will have an imperative impact on our performance. This kind of leisure time could also provide us the flexibility to spend more time with either family or beloved ones. This is essential in our fast-paced and materialistic lifestyles.
Form my personal thesis reading and doing puzzles might help to relax and at the same time, it increases the workload on our brains. This could be avoided with other activities such as movies or by doing nothing. In my opinion, doing nothing has the edge over mental activities in dealing with stress management.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: Little might
...would like to spend their leisure time. Few might argue that reading and solving puzzles ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ight assist in achieving new heights in ones career. Reading has been one of the fav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93430656934 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56041081738 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0494282001 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190599543231 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705962900429 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482797907014 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114849072097 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428905277419 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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