In this era of technological advancements, people have various modes of entertainment. As everyone wants to look modern and live a rich lifestyle, they are easily influenced by celebrities; they adore and try to impersonate their looks and styles. As the youngsters in our society have the burning desire to look smart and attractive for different reasons, this segment is the most influenced by famous people.
As per a recent conducted by ABC university, it was concluded that around one and fourth of the world’s population live below the poverty line. Hence, most of them spend their lives working for rich people to afford the necessities of life. In the scarce of money, they spend their lives dreaming of a fantasy world, where they are the king. Therefore, when they find some movie star or famous singer living the life they want, it affects them physiologically that eventually leads them to follow that celebrity’s way of living.
However, having said that, it cannot be concluded that people tend to influence only for the above-mentioned reasons. In fact, there is a wide segment of people, who wants to achieve something significant in their lives and make it large. Such people are deeply influenced by personalities who made from rags to riches and their life-stories are inspirational for people of all ages. For instance, I am extremely influenced by APJ Abdul Kalam because of his hard work to achieve his dreams and by his elite thoughts.
In essence, instead of impersonating a star’s hair or clothing styles, people should be encouraged by their dedication towards their work as everyone wants to live like them but ignores the years of their hard work. In my opinion, celebrities also enjoy their stardom but they should also come forward to break some myths about them to prevent the blind following.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he most influenced by famous people. As per a recent conducted by ABC universit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06229508197 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9111652471 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6614125696 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111908785598 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412813787312 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393676990777 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669731722323 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169944042993 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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