Nowadays, many events are happening around the world. However, most people didn’t know about them. Why don’t they know about these? We all live in the same planet. I agree that it is important to know about events happening around the world for the following reasons.
To begin with, we live in the same planet. We don’t know when or where something is going to happen to us. Hence, I think we should all work it out together when it happens. Most people don’t care about other country’s circumstances because they are busy making ends meet, but we have to be interested about other countries.
Secondly, all countries should get along together. Because it’s not good to start a war with each other. For example, in human terms, if you don’t care about your friend then the friend feels bad and upset. Therefore, you should care about them like other country’s incidents.
Overall, it is important to know about events happening around the world.
Because we are all human and live in the same planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 407.700716846 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03428571429 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61115972358 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 618.680645161 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0815627217 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7333333333 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218872226547 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941871977281 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105707999019 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153444120852 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123398220706 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.71 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 86.8835125448 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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