As technological innovation brings about rapid change retraining becomes a lifelong necessity. Therefore industry should be take responsibility for the education training of their workers. To what extent do you agree to this idea.
It is an incontrovertible fact that education has become a lifelong process for most people. In this era people are see new innovations everyday and they should be trained properly to extract desired benefits from it. Few masses given that it is the major duty of industry take the education and training to employees. This essay agrees to some extent with this notion and rendered the viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with there are plethora of reasons why industry should not take the responsibility for education and training of your workers. Firstly, many of employees are already trained and educated in their tertiary and vocational education institutes. They have only need to update with the new technical gadgets. Secondly, it is the duty of worker to give knowledge about technology and keep themselves abreast with it.
However, the companies have myriad of skills which they can teach your future employees. Also, if they will take the education and training to workers it will help produce their own training cost.
In conclusion, I tend out to say that it is equal responsibility of industries and people to take the education and training related to the technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...this era people are see new innovations everyday and they should be trained properly to ...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...al education institutes. They have only need to update with the new technical gadget...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15736040609 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83393336812 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0937721919 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3636363636 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324184686646 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114346613958 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701875997241 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18354993608 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673367722872 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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