Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city versus living in a small town. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The livelihood of a place whether it be a city or a village is decided upon various parameters such as the infrastructure, electricity facilities, employment options, climatic conditions, social conditions, transportation and connectivity to other parts, entertainment options and the list is continued. Living in city has its own perks and living in the village has it s own. The following two examples helps out in underscoring various advantages and disadvantages about living in city and village.
For any person, the infrastructure facilities along with the electrical facilities become the most important. This is because if there are no good houses, roads, transportation and connectivity facilities , then the modified basic need of human for good accommodation is not fulfilled. Therefore , according to development stretch that has already occurred in cities , they have an advantage of good infrastructure facilities. For example, in cities the power cuts are very rare on the other hand these cuts are very common in villages where they prove to be disadvantage. According to various reports, In India almost 30% of the villages have no active electricity connection and the rest are supplied with electricity on unpredictable basis because the supply to city is more important. Subsequently, the entertainment and recreational options are more in cities adding one more advantage to the list. For example, in any city you will find movie screens, malls , shopping complex , clubs , good eateries. The city like Mumbai has more than 200+ screens for the large population in the city. Such services may not be available in villages. On a personal opinion, I have never seen a single shopping mall or complex in villages. If you look into the city, the employment opportunities are also high in the city because of the development in infrastructure. However, there is a negative side to things as well. Most of the cities are not designed for large migrations that take place to cities and the facilities are burdened making them less efficient. For example, the roads in cities are quite big but the problem of traffic still exists because the large number of cars on the street. The local trains in Mumbai are very good example of how the quality of the system degrades because of extra load on to it. This marks the disadvantage of cities that the services needs to shared with a large number of population.
On the other hand, the village life is pretty soothing as compared to city life where large distances needs to be covered for small objectives as well. The climate in the villages is also good as compared to that of the cities. For example, the air pollution problem in Delhi is so severe that people had to install air filters in order to compensate for the bad quality of air adding to the disadvantage of cities that the climate and environment has degraded. The city life is pretty fast and therefore It gives very less time for people to stop for someone or inquire about someone widening the gap between people leading to breaking of relations which is not the case in the villages where people are very closely dependent and inter mingled with each other glued together because of the age old traditions that are lost in cities or celebrated with true motive kept aside. The cultural richness of the village is its most important advantage.
To conclude, the village and city has its own advantages and disadvantages making it very complex to choose one. However, it is completely dependent upon the individual choices and therefore on a personal opinion I prefer to live in city because of advantages of developed infrastructure , employment and connectivity which is lacking in villages but the villages are rich in cultural traditions, climate and environmental suitability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3194.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 627.0 407.700716846 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09409888357 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00399520894 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98312816147 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438596491228 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1045.8 618.680645161 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9596368745 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.846153846 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1153846154 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170363631193 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559799403779 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603027118808 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128357770562 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507793387543 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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