"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree.
It is often argued that researching a disease is more costly than preventing and more measures must be taken to prevent the diseases.However,while i agree that eradicating the disease has had a positive impact,I disagree that research must be stopped on curing them.
Prevention of diseases has always been attractive to scientists and researchers.The diseases can be halted and no extra costs are needed to cure these.People won't have to worry about these diseases and they can live a happy life without encountering these diseases in their life.For instance,Polio prevention is famous throughout the world and vaccinations are given to new born babies to prevent the disease.But even prevention takes a huge amount of money to research and implement and the prevention of many diseases is impossible as it may disrupt the balance in the eco-system
Curing on the other hand is extremely costly but without treatments for diseases the population standard of living decreases as they suffer from these and nations stop functioning which may lead to recession and loss of food .Humans may suffer for a long time due to absence of treatments and research and this may result in death.
If research is stopped on curing then humans may become extinct due to these diseases.For example,without cure for Ebola the human population may be eradicated.
To conclude, even though people think that prevention of diseases is optimal,it is not always the case and may lead to the downfall of humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, then, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20576131687 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13584027282 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 319.128794533 49.4020404114 646% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.25 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 20.7667163134 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222511897062 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139079673913 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667911348686 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126718274038 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728699661272 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.0946893788 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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