The children who grow up in a family short of money are more capable of dealing with problems in adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.What extent do you agree or disagree?
Child development depend upon the financial status of the family.In my opinion, the children raised from low- income family are more capable of solving the problems in later life as compared to the offspring who grow up by the wealthy family.Obviously, I agree to the given perspective to a certain extent on various counts.
Indeed, it can be initially be stated that children from humble background can tackle their unfavourable situations more easily than other counterpart.The main reason for this is that they faces problem in day to day life.So they learned to solve their problem.To illustrate, a child raised by poor parents cannot able to provide all necessary facilities for their child.Sometimes, they may fail to give food on time.But, their child understood that reality & don't even asked for food.They learned to sleep with hunger tummy.
Secondly, none can negate the fact that the offspring from poorer family are more hardworking & with more patience as compared to other wealthy families.Children from poorer families are ready to work despite time.That is the reason why many poorer children are at the highest position in the society.Child knows that it is necessary to work hard to satisfy basic needs of the life.For instance, a child wants a new dress then parents told them to wait till money gets.Thus the child develops more patience in their life.
Yet, it is viewed by some that offsprings of wealthy parents are more able to deal with the problems. Since the children are more educated.But, I would hazard that education is not a factor of dealing problems, because most of the illiterate& poorer children know to solve problems more appropriately than the richer ones.They learned it through their life experiences.
Hence , I would like to stick on my stand that poorer children are more capable of dealing problems because of their life experiences.Poorer children are facing problems in daily life so they are becoming expert to solve it.
- These days Scientist can tell whether a child will become criminal or not by examining the child at the age of three Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature Do you think that we can stop children from becoming criminals 84
- The children who grow up in a family short of money are more capable of dealing with problems in adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.What extent do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17701863354 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93152786466 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.912312698 49.4020404114 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.833333333 106.682146367 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6666666667 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287066509356 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165815066862 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653594642936 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180605166452 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069479258771 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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