Education is very important. How can children who are disinterested in study be motivated to learn?
education is very significant in each and every individual's life, especially among the children. Teaching students about good and bad are most important, certainly that can be achieved through schooling.this essay will emphasize how young people with no interest could be encouraged to study.
In the present situation the children feel uncomfortable as they are being burdened with homeworks and assessments. how can a child of age 4 or 5 can be able to do his or her assignments on a daily basis? this scenario must be changed in each and every schools.The institutions must focus on practical studies rather than theoretical lessons. For example some private schools in India still follow the theory procedure which must be eradicated for the benefit of the children. this instance is one of the major reason why literacy rate is very less in developing countries. Eventually they get demotivated and show minimal liking towards education.
Inorder to motivate the young minds the schools can introduce technology such as smart class, Outdoor sports activities to lighten up their knowledge. education cannot be thought unless the child shows interest towards it. this can be achieved only if the teachers inspire the students to learn new things and explore more. The liking towards studies can be achived among young people only by giving them what they need and how they want to pursue. For instance the chief minister of Tamilnadu Mr.Annadurai introduced a system where if the children attends the school regularly food will be served.Similarly we can adopt changes in technology to motivate young minds.
To conclude it is the corresponding schools and governments who must take necessary steps to make the children like studies and inspire them to like education.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28321678322 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87368346007 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.113306831 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363250469074 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105770418873 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485641126418 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198494952968 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552220777813 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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