Title: Essay topics: Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and
vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.What
are the advantages and disadvantages of this
Export of the essential commodities is very imperative to any nation. any countries have an abundance of good while others have scarcity. Thus export will help in maintaining the balance. To what extent, will it be advantageous to the nation?. This essay will put light on the merits and demerits of this approach.
The exports of essentials is beneficial in several ways. To begin, export would be useful for both the economies. because import economy would be able to fulfil the needs of the society on the other side export economy would get surplus income. The win-win situation would be there for both economies. In addition to this, it would also help in controlling the prices of the goods. For an instance, the crop of rice is produced in ample quantity in our country so we are sending to other nations and earning foreign income on it. Moreover, if the excess is not sent to other countries it would be wastage of the resources. This would also result in maintaining balance in the economy. This is the biggest reason that now papaya and oranges are available in every season. Furthermore, this would result in harmonious relations among various nations. Even this would provide more employment opportunities because people must be aware that their material will earn money from the outside of the country.
On the contrary, this would result in a deficiency of the goods in the exporting country. Although there would be a need for good in the home country, sellers would be more keen to earn profits through exports. Furthermore, this would be wastage of the sheer and rare resources which could be used for another motive.
In the end, it can be analyzed that the export of commodities must nowadays to meet the basic needs of the nation and moreover to maintain the harmony and balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84789644013 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56807077091 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521035598706 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.594652766 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170664005314 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631531087327 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304974401606 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108829574456 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306395486179 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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