Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role model for the young people who look up to them. In return for the million of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this social responsibility.
Being a role model for the young people is actually a finest job. Today's generation is the modern generation and people believe on reality rather than myths, young people have an forethought about something, they basically follow some good people, their advice and they pray them as a role model. Primarily, role model is a word which gives good advice, motivation to the followers and so on to follow themselves at the right path and achieve the goal.
There are many famous and popular movie stars, sports stars who become succeed by doing too much of hard work and faced lots of hardship in their life. Take an paradigm, movie star Sharukh Khan is a hardcore celebrity of today's world, actually he is a Bollywood actor but his admiration is all over the world as well as he is a role model of too many young people. He briefs as many as obstacles he faced and to become a successful human being how much hard work a person must do in his life. He gives motivational speech at so many programme, seminars and so on. For this sake he has been awarded many prestigious awards nationally and internationally too.
Another big instance is Mr. Virat Kohli a sport star actually a cricket star, ranks as top ten cricketer in the world. He is a role model of millions of young people too. Taking himself from a low level to a noble class , he faced a lots of nuances, obstacles in his life, to become popular himself and to make his country proud in the world. Many of young generations follow him today and his strategies in their life. Despite all this, the stars paid off millions of dollars to their contribution. They are fulfilling their responsibilities to the societies and the country too, and of course, we should except them to fulfill all the special responsibility from there.
- Most culture encourage individuals to sacrifice a large part of their own personalities in order to be like other people. Thus, most people are afraid to think or behave differently because they do not want to be excluded. 66
- Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such language from becoming extinct. 50
- Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role model for the young people who look up to them. In return for the million of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this social responsibility. 50
- All to often, companies hire outside consultants to suggests ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary 33
- On Balmer Island , where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians the town council of Balmer Island should limit the 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... model for the young people is actually a finest job. Todays generation is the mo...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ty rather than myths, young people have an forethought about something, they basic...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ed lots of hardship in their life. Take an paradigm, movie star Sharukh Khan is a ...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun programme seems to be countable; consider using: 'many programmes'.
Suggestion: many programmes
...ife. He gives motivational speech at so many programme, seminars and so on. For this sake he h...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...imself from a low level to a noble class , he faced a lots of nuances, obstacles i...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...a low level to a noble class , he faced a lots of nuances, obstacles in his life, to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, as to, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62264150943 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61008639269 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8186714058 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268433981185 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992194412282 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753985263434 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181625097495 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509441867465 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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