USING A COMPUTER EVERYDAY CAN HAVE MORE NEGATIVE THAN POSITIVE EFFECT ON YOUR CHILDREN.
DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
we all know that technology becomes an important party of our life. because of new development like mobile phones and the internet, we ignore our personal relations even also other society people. in my opinion, a new development in technology increases our contact outside the home we not focusing on personal relation. in my view, development in technology is best to compete with other country but there are also some week points of development.
in my point of view, technology affects personal contact in both positives or negatives way. with the help of the mobile phone, we can contact each other at any time with a little cost. however the mobile phone also ignores the face to face interaction with the relatives we just make a call and that all, this is nor good for the good relation. on the other hand, we can communicate a fast speed with the help of technology it may mot possible without technology. for saving cost and time I prefer development in technology id good for us but if we consider a relationship, technology gives a negative effect on the relations.
if we consider the recent trend, children of age 2,3 years know very well how to operate a mobile phone how we have to open any app. using of mobile phone in the age 2,3 is not good for the child. we have to control on that. this this " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">days technology also use for study purpose that is good but the use of technology to hack other bank account is given a negative singe.
in conclusion, we can say that improvement in technology has negatives impact on the family relation or social relation but in the other side development of technology increase the leaving stander of the person. it also helps in reducing the cost of contact with each other and saves time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86335403727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89872522397 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506211180124 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2176400145 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773292678261 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322854774995 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287320690699 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509554786273 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339500718139 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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