Sometimes people are rejecting a job opportunity due to their age or other circumstances. Is it a negative or a positive approach? Give your opinion and relevant examples（revised version)
In today’s complex commercial world, seeking an employment has become more difficult for all folks of lives. However, there is a considerable number of people who are not accepting their job offers for several reasons. From my perspective, I tend to perceive that as a positive approach, although the negative side needs to be closely considered.
Firstly, there is a fact that being employed enables one to shoulder the responsibility in terms of family and personal prospects. With increasing living costs and competition, choosing being unemployed seems unwise. However, sometimes those who d...
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