Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to environment damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Economic upswing plays an vital role in the people’s growth. Although economic growth is the way to fight with poverty, some people advocate against this growth because they believe this may lead to exploitation of environment. I strongly agree that the growing economy exploits the environment.
There are several reasons as to why economic growth should be deterred. Firstly, environment is deteriorating because of industrialization. As the more forest land is being utilized for setting up industrial units, the green areas are depleting. Secondly, the water bodies are being adulterated because most of the factories do not use proper treatment plants to remove chemicals from water. For example, The Ganga as well as other rivers in India are polluted by the various manufacturing units.
Furthermore, since most of these industries solely depends on the fossil fuels, we may run out of these in near future. For example, in recent surveys it has been concluded that, if we keep on consuming these resources, will deplete all the resources within 20 years.
On the other hand, economic revitalization is the only way to help impoverished individuals. Therefore, government bodies should promote renewable energy resources and subsidies should be provided to industries for utilizing green energy resources more efficiently.
In conclusion, I agree that the economic growth have the detrimental effects on environment. However, replacing conventional energy resources may help to mitigate damage caused to environment.
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| 2019-06-03 | enassar | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Economic upswing plays an vital role in the people's growth....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59656652361 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11563744195 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639484978541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.525572853 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236619886618 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759409063491 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630275850522 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116567497535 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690871504191 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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