Topic: Some people think instead of preventing climate change, we should find ways to live with it. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that people should learn how to survive with the changes of climate and not trying to fight with them. This essay totally disagrees with this view because climate change has affected seriously people all over the world and we should have a global action plan immediately to cope with this problem.
The severe influences of global warming have been proved by facts and scientific researches. These impacts include glacier melting, rising temperatures, droughts, and floods in many countries. For example, climate change made strong heat waves in Europe last summer and set the new record of the high temperature in many European countries like Germany, France, and the UK. The extremely hot weather made the lives of millions of residents became more difficult because they did not equip the air conditioners in their houses. Therefore, it is impossible for people to find a one -fit-all reliable solution to living comfortably with the fast-changing climate.
People can not find an alternative measure to live peacefully with global warming than trying to slow down this process. This is because that if governments do not have a universal and cooperative solution urgently, people will be no longer safe on the Earth. Air has been polluted massively by emission gases, drinking water and natural resources have been exploited excessively, many species have been extinct, and as a result, natural disasters such as tsunamis, hurricanes have happened more frequently to threaten the lives of humans.
In conclusion, fighting climate change is the only solution for people around the world to live safely and peacefully on the Earth and all states should reach a global action plan soon to protect our planet, preserving the safe habitat for humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'record'.
Suggestion: record
...waves in Europe last summer and set the new record of the high temperature in many Europea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25614035088 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65733825452 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9008842479 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.181818182 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178342072701 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702539766569 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595936490854 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111980249034 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509554564255 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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