The linegraph below shows the percentage of tourists who visited four different attractions in Brighton.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The linegraph below shows the percentage of tourists who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to England who went to four different tourist attractions in Brighton from 1980 to 2010

Overall, it is clear that there was a upward trend in the number of tourist who visited Pavilion and Pier, while this figure for Art Gallery and Festival decreased in the period from 1980 to 2010

It can be seen from the graph, in 1980, the percentage of tourists who visited Pier was lowest, at only exactly 10%. Despite of fluctuations, this figure increase significantly to a peak of over 20% in 2010. While, the amount of Pavilion’s tourists varied more dramatically with the starting point in 1980 was about 25%. However, this figure finished at just over 30% although it reached a peak of roughly 50% in 1995

The most popular tourist attraction in England in 1980 was Festival with precisely 30% of total Brighton visitors, after decreasing steadily to about 28% in 2010 . There was also downward trend in the amount of tourists who went to Art Gallery. However, this figure plunged to only under 10% in 2010 even though it soared to the highest point at nearly 40% in 1985

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...decreasing steadily to about 28% in 2010 . There was also downward trend in the am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80102040816 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61009482905 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.058834916 43.030603864 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136106416706 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575463594045 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622261375392 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106179969094 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532416505703 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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