Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter
Explain how you heard about his/her retirement
Describe what made him/her such a great teacher
Say how your teacher affected your life
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this letter finds you in a pink health and the best spirits. I am very happy by knowing that you finally decided to get retirement after sixty-five years of intense teaching service.
I received a formal invitation letter last week from the school regarding your retirement farewell and celebration. I am extremely delighted by knowing that the school will be arranging a huge celebration and motivational speech followed by delicious dinner together.
Your inner qualities such as hard-working nature, dedication to the students, modesty, sympathy, and last but not least, the continuous learning attitude have motivated numerous students. Your unique style of teaching, drawing and mimicking different theories, made you pioneer in this field I believe.
Last not but least, I was deeply affected by your great qualities. I never forget your special advice about to speak the truth always irrespective of circumstances. This quality always enabling me for charity activites and enriching me with sense of positivity and hope despite adverse situations.
I pray for your great health and my best wishes for your new retirement life.
Yours faithfully,
Brijesh Hirani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I hope this letter finds you in a pink h...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e years of intense teaching service. I received a formal invitation letter las...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur retirement farewell and celebration. I am extremely delighted by knowing that ...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew retirement life. Yours faithfully, Brijesh Hirani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, regarding, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88096858405 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.971063914 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263518326166 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104788438991 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761340978991 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131296411921 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634379259917 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.