Working from home, some think as beneficial some people think it may distract the family routine.
Discuss both views and what is your opinion?
Nowadays, the advancement of internet technology and computers have turned home into the office, so employees can perform their duties by sitting at an apartment. Many people assert that this is indeed helpful as it saves a lot time whereas others contradict this thought by arguing that the work from home is adversely disturbing other family members’ daily tasks. However, in my opinion, work from home is blissful.
It has been witnessed that there are many advantages of working from home. First, the people do not require to drive car or bike through the congestion of vehicles; consequently, this saves at least a couple of hours which in fact could be utilized to focus on work at home. Second, car parking has been a major concern in recent times due to not only limited space availability for parking but also the burgeoning number of vehicles. And because of this, work from home is beneficial as it would solve parking constraint issues. Moreover, working at home allow the employees a greater amount of flexibility as compared to the company office; for example, it would allow them in adjusting the time-schedule according to their personal family work, whereas they must follow strict regulations at the corporate office which is strenuous sometimes.
However, work from home also cause disturbance to the other members of their daily activities. For example, if the employee has some important meetings to attend via the internet, then he may need to speak aloud during the conversation with office staff; needless to say, but this would surely distract others. In addition, if the employee is working in a bedroom, then this would prevent other members to enter into the room.
To put it in a nutshell, although the work from home disturb the family’s daily activities sometimes, I would say it is useful as its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'driving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: driving
... home. First, the people do not require to drive car or bike through the congestion of v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, whereas, at least, for example, in addition, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0935483871 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77626329393 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1850093458 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.583333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203444865076 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895227040007 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539823151896 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126848980644 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156326662066 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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