Some parents say that giving expensive gifts to a child can create bad habits in him/her. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include any relevant examples from your experience.
It is argued by many parents that costly gifts items spoils children. I disagree with this notion and believe that it helps to motive them as well as teach them to be practical in life.
The main reason why I think giving costly items helps chid is because it help them to do better in his studies. This is to say that when parents lure their kids by offering them reward on getting better grades in exam, they prepare hard for exams to get high numbers in every subject. This type of approach helps parents to make their child study hard for exam and it also has some positive outcome on their grades. Take article from child care a leading magazine in india, which states that 90 percentage of success has been observed when parents promise their children to award them with the gift of their choice on getting top three positions in a class. So gifting a child expensive things can often help parents to accomplished their desire from children.
Another reason is that children learn to be practical. This means they know that they will get gifts from their parents only when they fullfill their parents desire. So from this they become aware that to get things which they seek they have to work hard and this type of approach is good for their future as it develops the habit of competitiveness in them. Take Xiaomi phone owner Xu Zen for example, in an interview given to a new channel CNBC awaaz he told the habit which has cultivated him is the outcome of his hard work. He further told that his parents always used to give expensive gifts on his achievements in life and this has made him a hard-working person. Therefore this type of habits can often helps parents to prepare their children for future.
In my opinion, awarding a child with costly gifts can often motivate them to work hard and also can often make them practical minded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6006006006 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21432734435 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2422141334 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163755931828 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688583668572 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436065754726 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103151847675 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288856165573 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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