You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In you letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Serene,
Good morning, I am writing this letter to request you for a leave in the next month.
I am working so hard from the last quarter to meet all the project deadlines. Daily working for about 10 hours of day handling my tasks as well as helping other colleagues . Weekends are not exceptions from the last month or so. We are well appreciated by the company higher officials for closing the project on a happy note.
After immense pressure, I would like to take an off now from my work. I wanted to go on a holiday to visit the Birmingham palace. Please help me to approve the leave for next month. There are only 20 working days in the coming month as per the companies calendar. Hope you note down.
Regarding my outstanding work, I will knowledge transfer Steve to cover the pending tickets by updating the users promptly. He can always reach me through my email if he have any queries. Kindly excuse me for the delay may cause for the reply. Thank you for your support.
John,
Senior Developer, IT Department
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Serene, Good morning, I am writing this letter t...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...asks as well as helping other colleagues . Weekends are not exceptions from the la...
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Line 19, column 171, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... always reach me through my email if he have any queries. Kindly excuse me for the d...
^^^^
Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you for your support. John, Senior Developer, IT Department
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66129032258 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3989307197 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693548387097 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8516706062 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213660754103 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712753741292 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851332529236 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108723322182 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716829549355 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.