You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.
Dear Warden,
This is John,a student from your university pursuing second year computer science. My enrollment number is 2231
I am writing you this letter to report you about my roommate who has been a head ache for me from a long time. We are currently accommodated by university in Downtown residential campus.
Its been always a trouble accompanying because of the unwanted disturbance he creates. He has a habit of calling his friends to our room and making it a mess by turning it to like a club by increasing the volume from his speakers to a unbearable level. They use it for playing cards all the evening and watching Netflix without turning off the television even in the mid-nights. He always initiate's partying with his friends without missing a single weekend and making the environment very unfriendly.
I have tried to warn him many times and I have informed his parents about this, but they couldn't take any action on him.
Its very hard to concentrate on my academics and I am very much worried about my grades as well in the coming examination. Hope you have understand the situation. Take necessary action as earliest as possible helping me out by either shifting him or me to another room.
Thanks,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
Dear Warden, This is John,a student from your university pursuing s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er science. My enrollment number is 2231 I am writing you this letter to report y...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...reasing the volume from his speakers to a unbearable level. They use it for playi...
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Line 15, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...formed his parents about this, but they couldnt take any action on him. Its very har...
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Line 17, column 138, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...n the coming examination. Hope you have understand the situation. Take necessary action as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8779342723 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7293030607 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5800820053 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200423872058 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606450052463 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480666256918 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857131452797 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420408978168 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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