Museums add huge value to society. It provides us tons of information about many animals which are not found anymore, as well as the archeological discoveries; few gives a visualization of the ancient invention related to science and technology. There are a bunch of museums all around the world which enable people to explore the collections after paying the entry fees, and some others are absolutely free for everybody. From my view, even though the entry fees sometimes a little hefty for few citizens, but that certainly did not outweigh the advantage of well maintenance of items present in the museum. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantages of admission changes.
Many museums ask for an amount to be paid before entering the museum and enjoy the collections they have. Sometimes the entry it has not much impact on the visitors because the fee is less, whereas a few of them are way more expensive. Due to the high charges, people refrain themselves, even their children, from visiting the museum. The entry fee creates a boundary around these people to absorb the knowledge available in the museum.
Keeping a museum clean and well maintained itself is a challenge. Some of the items are very fragile and sensitive that it demands for an experience to manage them and responsibility are given to the professional. The admission fees are used received from visitors helps to bear the cost of these. The charges are even used to enrich the stocks and adding new things to expand the experience.
In conclusion, even though the fees charge for admission restricts a group of people to enter the museum due to their personal constraint, but I believe the charges help the museum to run smoothly and give the best experience every time to the audience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15407854985 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74517144553 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489425981873 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7126147446 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173218786937 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066198729537 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418395751181 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120502214039 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222715993496 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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