The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tabular chart illustrates the figures of the survey carried out in a downtown restaurant with a small scale in a week of October 7th - 13th, with regard to the projected sales of this restaurant. It consists of information about the sales of this restaurant in 2 sessions : Lunch and Dinner. In general, the revenues of the restaurant in Dinner is always higher than the income values in Lunch.
According to the graph, at $4.350, Friday Dinner is the time has the highest amount of income values. At the first 4 days of the week, the incomes ranges from over $3,600 to $3,800. After it reach the peak on Friday, there is a slightly decrease at the weekends. Significantly, on Lunch Sunday, the profit drops to $1.550 which is the lowest amount of revenues of the week.
To sum up, sales of the restaurant in a downtown business district which is conducted in this research predominantly has a positive sign in week days, specially in Friday night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sales of this restaurant. It consists of information about the sales of this rest...
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... general, the revenues of the restaurant in Dinner is always higher than the inco...
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...r it reach the peak on Friday, there is a slightly decrease at the weekends. Significantly, on Lunc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in general, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72619047619 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66275737096 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.035319631 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161739444844 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660432605365 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492757575817 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111396403243 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445004257463 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.