Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad, and enjoying the local attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
Nowadays, people have many options to enjoy their holidays. Some people believe that moving to a foreign country to live in a hotel and witnessing the domestic attractions is the best option. This essay will completely agree with this view.
One of the key reasons why going abroad for spending holidays is one of the best vacation enjoyment options is that this will offer a new environment for the refreshment. In most cases, people are likely to go for a vacation to get some refreshment; such refreshments can be achieved extensively while watching some attractions which are different from regular environment. To illustrate, I got the best refreshment while vacationing in Indonesia because its local attractions are completely different from my home country’s attractive places.
Another vital reason for going to a foreign country for spending a holiday is that people are likely to have the scope to learn new cultures and customs. Generally, people visiting foreign countries have opportunities to experience local customs because of roaming across new cities for enjoying local attractions. Therefore, travelers are expected to obtain knowledge about new cultures and customs to a certain extent. According to a recent study on foreign tourists of Malaysia, more than 85.0% of them gain an initial understanding of the Malaysian cultures through visiting Malaysia.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the view that visiting a foreign country and enjoying local attractions are the most superior way of spending holidays because of offering new refreshments and providing the scope to understand new cultures and customs.
- Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online.Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- In recent time, extensive marketing and promotional activities forced people to buy things out of the necessity. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company while others believe that young employees are better Discuss both views and give your opinion 59
- Television sports shows such as Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much To you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00998298311 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52734375 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8123210294 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.272727273 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217757190636 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893752512314 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057998340175 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14711664214 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336738615733 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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