The diagram below illustrates the 11 step process of coffee production and how it is packed for selling in supermarkets and shops.
Overall, making coffee is a vigorous process that needs both mechanical and physical work for a successful outcome.
First, the farmers pick coffee beans from the plant manually placing them in baskets. Next, they dry these beans under the heat of the scourging sun, using a rake to segregate each piece and be evenly exposed to avoid moisture. After that, it was roasted on fire and once finished, cooling rapidly was done. Extreme cold temperature below 0 degrees is needed to have a better output, at the same time it is substantial in shrinking these beans. Grinding will be the next phase using a machine and through this, finer granules will be made. Water will then be added to these grinded and refined beans however, straining the mixture thereafter is necessary to separate the coarse granules. It will be frozen again and will be subjected to the second grinding process yet, this time a liquid form will be formed rather than a solid one. Vacuum drying will be performed before finally packing into jars because it prevents the product from spoiling easily due to precipitated moisture. Finally, these packed jars will be delivered to market for sale and consumer consumption.
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- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write 35
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96846846847 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50606358239 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9980927463 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859694232795 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402363462118 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059863136372 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109481364806 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753012177416 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.