Life is a set of challenges, and how one performs in such tough times determines ones success. And if one gives up in these challenges of life how is he or she supposed to achieve his or her aim. I strongly agree that one should never give up, no matter what life throws at you. I have strong reasons to support this thought from my own personal experiences and
First, people feel like giving up when they think they can’t try anymore, but who know if one more attempt is all that is needed to achieve their goal. For example, it is said that Thomas Edison made one thousand attempts with diffe...
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