You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• give details of your visit to the restaurant
• mention the reason for the celebration
• say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude on your restaurant and the services you provide for your customers. My family and I were at your restaurant last Thursday to celebrate my mother's 60th birthday. Since it was a special night for all of us, and we had such a great time in your restaurant, I decided to thank you.
I was responsible to choose and book the restaurant for that night, and after doing some research I choose your restaurant, at first because of all positive reviews from your customers, and then for the spectacular views of the restaurant. I booked a table beside the window for 10 persons. Our table was decorated very well with flowers and some candles overlooking a garden. There was live music and a professional band was performing some old songs.
As I mentioned, it was my mother's 60th birthday and we wanted to celebrate it more special than previous years. Actually, after my father died, my mother got some depression and we are trying to make her feels better and that night this happened.
I really appreciate your services, staff is very friendly and welcoming. That warm and friendly atmosphere create such a home-like environment. Your restaurant is a place that people can get a red-carpet treatment, besides high level of quality for both food and service. We ordered different kind of foods and all of them were well cooked with fresh ingredients.
Once again, I appreciate your service and the quality of food, which is a kind of respect to your customers.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my gratitude on ...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your customers. Yours sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, look, really, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89513108614 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74008883097 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1410398188 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247541492109 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834753485277 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067285027014 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137413824417 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839721556283 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.