Your friend is in another country, write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
why you want to work there
what skills and work experience you have
inquire benefits (salary and hours).
Dear John Clark
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to take some advice about work opportunities in your country.I recently got an Express Entry visa. So I want to know more about employment in Canada.
You know this is my dream to visit Canada once in a life. Luckily ! I got visa recently, I want to do work here to strengthen my finances to makes sufficient fund available for my further studies. And it also aid me to get more experience about my studies.
I am graduated with Bechlor of Science in Nursing and have 3 years experience in reputable hospital. I am working here as a head nurse in emergency ward so I have much confidence and skills to deal with patients.
Do you know about the salary and working hours? If you do please do me a favour and tell me about these benefits.
Speak soon
Best regards
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...bout work opportunities in your country.I recently got an Express Entry visa. So ...
^
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bout work opportunities in your country.I recently got an Express Entry visa. So ...
^
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'aids'?
Suggestion: aids
...ble for my further studies. And it also aid me to get more experience about my stud...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52242166564 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9888168288 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9090909091 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262383054304 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092706740986 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796740423371 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158907502972 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104314241069 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.