Some people believe that money is the best gift for teenagers while other disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Providing opulence to the young ones, unanimity of shrewd believes, is the best gift for them, however, opponents of this idea think, it is not a suitable gift for younger people. I will discuss both the views, before giving any particular opinion, in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, giving money as a gift, provide reinforcement to children to work harder. Because when they get money as a gift from their parents and others, it considered as a reward for good deeds, which enhance their confidence and instincts to do good deeds. Moreover, it also boosts management skills for finances. When teenagers get money as a gift they can use it by themselves and they have to manage according to their needs.
On the flip side, youngsters can indulge in bad activities if they get a high amount of fiscal al as a gift only because they not understand the value of money and use it for wrong purposes. In addition, it may also leads to juvenile delinquency because once they get luxuries, it may paves them to do crimes for money. For instance, a research conducted in one metropolitan city shows that the children who get enough money in their childhood are 40% more likely to indulge in crime during adulthood.
In my opinion, giving money as a present to teenagers is a great gift for children but it should be in restricted manner
To conclude, both opinions have their own significance, however it is parents responsibility to tell their children about effective way to use money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84496124031 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72379980753 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.738784973 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255245263663 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107263734074 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531039043284 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161433639225 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643565787806 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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