Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say.
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
New generation has great influence on teenagers because off their experience and maturity level. Some people think that children should follow them according to their wishes and advises. However, some hold an opposed View and say they should do things on there on and challenge what older people say. I will discuss both the views in the upcoming paragraphs along with my own opinion.
To begin with elder people have vast experience of their life and they can provide proper guidance to the teenagers because it is the age which needs proper guidance, so elders can be the best guide for them.Moreover, they have higher maturity level then youngsters, so it is better to learn from them about how to handle the thick and thin situations wisely.As an instance, a survey conducted in one primary school wheels that more than 60% of children's role models are their grandparents. Hence, grandparents has great influence on their grandchildren.
On the other hand, opponents of this idea think that the children should do things according to their mind and challenge what the elders say them. Nowadays there is the era of modern technology, everything has been done with the help of machines, gone are the days when most of the works are done by hands, So there are much age gap between them and due to this Young ones follow only the advice of elder people then they cannot adjust in the modern era. Hence they should do choose their work and study or any other important decision according to the demand of their work and world. Younger children have to push out their boundaries to achieve something big so, they have to do things according to the modern era. Ergo, this is the big reason why they should challenge elder's decisions.
In my opinion, Children should maintain balance between the advice of the advice of elder as well as the demands of modern era.
In conclusion,Both views have their own importance but it depends upon the type of advice and IQ level of child to do things on their own.
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but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82471264368 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46422916009 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.840228536 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19283015007 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833647681076 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921028755936 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11891156745 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130054048168 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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