In this contemporary world, mostly people suffering form serious health problems which is due to consumption of junk food in excessive amount by every individual in different countries.By imposing tax in the fast food chains, can act as a solution for major health problems.I strongly agree with the above statement.This essay will discuss about imposing tax on general public which is eventually for their future betterment in other ways.
First and for most, the unhygienic food suppliers and restaurants should be imposed with high Fine and punishment for making innocent people fool around for just because of labelling of food and make them attractive using different strategies. Mostly, Youngsters are very foodie of junk food ascribed of society environment. Everyone is consuming junk food even not knowing the right amount calories in it for example Fat, protein and carbohydrates. Higher authorities should impose higher tax on the Food Chain sectors just like they imposed taxation on cigarette and liquor make new policies for public by imposing tax on every individual.
However, the Lower class will effected but their health issues will be reduced due to limited junk food supply or on higher prices .Furthermore in Local business market ,Setup New restaurant are designed for higher class and different food categories.For instead top rated restaurants to ensure that Junk food chain claims that they are providing quality of junk food rather then crap food like other low level food sectors but most of the people within time realise that after consuming exceed amount of junk food throughout the week will lead to difficulties in life serious health issues for example Obesity,Diabetics,Cancer. The government shall make a special team form health department to ensure about checking food quality of different food sectors in every month and share report to top management of health department. In general , government should think about to introduce social awareness programs for public related to Healthy lifestyle and educating people for good and bad choice.
To sum up, the hazardous effects of fast food in the country can be mitigated by integrative approach such as tax imposition, awareness programs and cooperative efforts both government and health department.
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- In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extend do you agree or disagree wi 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, in general, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40668523677 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91271027959 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543175487465 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.630991838 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.666666667 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.8888888889 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29836579378 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132269118724 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559153201271 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193807211652 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460133770804 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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