Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely debated that plastic bags should be banned as they pollute the environment. I vehemently espouse that the usage of plastic bags for shopping should be prohibited.
Ostensibly, the plastic bags are non-biodegradable products that mean it may take hundreds of years to decompose. Therefore, when the bags are buried into the land, it can make a land barren and it can take another hundred of years to revive that land or if thrown into a sea it may enter a food chain causing a harmful effect on marine life. Recent research by the agriculture scientists has shown that the quality and the quantity of the agriculture yield has fallen drastically because the crops are not able to penetrate in the soil and are not getting nutrients from the soil.
Furthermore, these plastic bags if burnt releases toxic chemicals which have a detrimental effect on the environment. these harmful products will be released into the air which gradually leads to dangerous ailments like cancer and other respiratory diseases. Looking at the scenario, a global organisation namely Hindustan Unilever of India has run a campaign that motivates people to discontinue using plastic bags and have placed bins to dispose of them.
To conclude, I am in favour that the usage of plastic bags should be completely stopped because of the unfavourable effects on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... detrimental effect on the environment. these harmful products will be released into ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05309734513 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89106050985 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3486685925 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258173741738 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115431509996 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900629212007 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17067111871 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987040978256 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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