Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you can not now join him. You have found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your friend:
- explain why you cannot go anymore
- say who can go instead or you
- say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Jay,
Hi, I hope that you and your family are in pink of health. I am writing this letter to apologies for the inconvenience caused by my last-minute refusal to go out with you for a movie this weekend. I knew we had planned everything and we’re really excited to spend quality time after a long time but I sincerely feel sorry for this and hope that you'll forgive me.
Firstly, I would like to tell you that I am running out of time to complete my assignment, which is due to the last two weeks. It is a French assignment which is very necessary for me to complete it this weekend so that I can get full grades in my final exam.
I would like to suggest you that, my colleague Satyam is ready to join you for the movie this weekend as he is free and wants to go out this weekend after a long and tiring day of work. He is a fantastic person and can turn any sad situation into a funnier one with his wits and jokes. Besides this, he is a perfect partner as he had in-depth knowledge about movie and play as he used to take part actively in drama since his school times.
Again, please consider my apology, I would make up for this with a beautiful dinner at my home on next Sunday. I am promising you again that we’ll have a good weekend this time.
Can't wait to see you again. Let’s catch you soon.
Lots of Love,
Milan.
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| 2019-11-11 | Milan Desai | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...erely feel sorry for this and hope that youll forgive me. Firstly, I would like ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 114, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ful dinner at my home on next Sunday. I am promising you again that we'll have a good w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...;ll have a good weekend this time. Cant wait to see you again. Let's catch...
^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: Lots of (Love)
... again. Let's catch you soon. Lots of Love, Milan.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29230769231 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32191450795 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9797326438 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204191168964 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833720728428 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613353729733 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127427242291 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529569026207 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.