Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
In this contemporary world, the rate of waste produced by humans is inclining with a great pace. this essay will discuss why it is happening and suggest some of the measures to be taken by the government in order to solve his issue.
there are two major reasons behind the rise in rubbish. first is the continuous growth in population. In fact, there are around 7 billion of people on earth, as a result, they consume more and more; discharging a large amount of waste in the environment. For instance, a research showed that one person generally produces 1.5 Kilograms of rubbish on his or her daily basis. thus, earth means more utilization of its resources resulting into the production of waste on its surface. The second factor linked to the first is the low literacy rate among individuals of different societies. Illiterate folks are unaware of the fact that there is a fine line between the utilization and exploitation of the goods they possess. For example, most of the garbage is found in the areas occupied by uneducated people. thus, these are the two major factors responsible for this increase in garbage.
However, tackling this issue involves altering the mindset of people from habit of wasting the materials to make their proper use which can be done only with the help of government. For example, government should pose a heavy fine or tax to the ones who are found to produce excessive amount of scraps. In addition, people should be given sufficient knowledge through organizing seminars or public meetings regarding the future-problems that would be faced by them because of the waste they are producing at present. that is why; this matter could be resolved only by taking necessary actions.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons behind the increase rate in disposal by humans and provided some measures required to be taken. In my opinion, until efforts are made to shift the public consciousness, this problem will only escalate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96072507553 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71314232616 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577039274924 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8570644077 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19109579698 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524454467152 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043003366437 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104625663288 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042207655602 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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