the percentage of car ownership in Great Britain according to household

Essay topics:

the percentage of car ownership in Great Britain according to household.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of car possession in the UK according to families from 1961 to 2001.

Overall, the general trend for car ownership was upward in the period of 40 years. Moreover, most people had 2+ cars in those years.

In 1961, the percentage for people who had no car was about 70% while 2+cars was 10% and 1 car was nearly 30%. Over the 10 year period, it had dramatic changes in the possession in Great Britain. The ownership of no car fell significantly, it continued to decrease in the next 40 years and in 2001 it was approximately 10%. From 1961 to 2001, the families possessed cars that had rapid growth with nearly 50% in 2001. it moderately rose in the users of 1 car, and in the next 30 years, it had slight changes at nearly 40%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d rapid growth with nearly 50% in 2001. it moderately rose in the users of 1 car, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51048951049 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5434557587 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2622859338 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.625 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261532498176 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116205538237 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485297154689 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180827420202 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288030716403 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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