Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Proper education and good healthcare facilities are the two-determining factor for country’s economic growth. Although, some denizens believe that education and medical care should be funded by the government, others have an opinion that the payment for the same is the responsibility of the community. This essay will argue that the government of the country should be held responsible for ensuring an enlightened and healthy people.
To embark on, access to education is a basic human right. It not only raises political and social awareness but also creates employment opportunities. It should be the responsibility of the government to make the school education up to 18 years of age to encourage the younger generation complete their schooling. For example, according to the research Canada has 98% of literacy rate because of the free school education provided by its government. Moreover, the country’s administration should make sure to provide free health maintenance to its community, by introducing health insurance schemes. As a result, the people will not fear to pay a large share of their salary for doctor appointments and expensive treatments. A healthier society will contribute to the overall economic, political and social enhancement of a nation For Instance, in UK people are issued with health cards which covers more than 50% of health protection cost.
On the contrary, making education and health care treatments free for all the people is not possible as it will not only require the government to reserve lumpsum amount of the budget but will also put a burden on the society as they will have to pay huge taxes to the ministry. For example, in USA the education and medical facilities in not free, it puts a pressure on the community because education and health protection is extravagant.
To conclude, I strongly agree in order to have a well established and politically strong nation the management should make it a point to provide free edification and Medicare facilities to its society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... others have an opinion that the payment for the same is the responsibility of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23853211009 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08527076864 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.104741578 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25914789119 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959097664861 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578040627097 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156811711969 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778013245498 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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