Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, different crimes are rampant all over the country although there are corresponding law punishments for it. People still tend to do heinous acts because of vast reasons that for them considered as acceptable. This essay will explain the both views and my opinion with regards to the concept of longer imprisonment is the best way to lessen crime and also, discuss other alternative ways of reducing it.
Longer imprisonment in my opinion is not the best way to reduce crime. I consider it as a shallow way in order to give due justice to the oppressed family and the victim itself. For example, in my country, the crime rate doubled the moment that death penalty was abolished. Rape cases, murder and robbery are the top cases always broadcasted on television however there is no due process nor justice implemented.
I believe that other alternative ways are better in reducing crime. For example, death penalty and lethal injection, these way people will be afraid or somewhat hesitant to commit any crime because this will be grave enough to suffice their wrongful acts. My father was killed by drug addicts while on his way home after work, and experiencing this dreaded situation, I will never say no to these kind of punishment. Innocent lives will be protected and this will also give an advantage to get even with the culprit after due process.
In my opinion, committing immoral acts need to have equivalent punishment so that it will serve as a lesson and warning flag to the criminals. “An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth” is my principle in life and it will be so fulfilling if I also see the person who killed my father, the only one that I love the most, be sentenced to death too.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...eaded situation, I will never say no to these kind of punishment. Innocent lives will be p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72757475083 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6154979586 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.438375654 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.49484536082 669% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267368860005 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126201239404 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1546843606 0.0603063233224 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170095804297 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972020683961 0.0580467560999 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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