You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR, and supervisor to
Explain the reason why yo decline the offer
Express your gratitude
Explain you like ur current job very much
Dear sir,
I am writing to you based on the job offer got recently from your company, and to state the reasons why I wouldn't be taking this new work.
I applied, for the job in your company sometimes ago, before I got engaged in this my present business. it has always been my wish self-employed, although due to difficulties and lot more in our country, one must work to raise fund to start-up something. The I applied for this job to raise capital to start my business. There is no need for me taking this job anymore
sir, I really appreciate your kind gesture towards me, seeing me worthy of the job, your support and encouragement back then, it really meant a lot to me.
have derived so much job and peace of mind in this my business, I have so much time for myself and my family. Surprisingly, the challenges and all rally worth been committed to it, which I believe will yield to something big soon.
I look forward to working with u ain't he future if need arise
Yours Sincerely,
Aisha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to you based on the job off...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...company, and to state the reasons why I wouldnt be taking this new work. I app...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ot engaged in this my present business. it has always been my wish self-employed, ...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'I'?
Suggestion: The; I
...rk to raise fund to start-up something. The I applied for this job to raise capital t...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eed for me taking this job anymore sir, I really appreciate your kind gestu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sir
...for me taking this job anymore sir, I really appreciate your kind gesture ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...then, it really meant a lot to me. have derived so much job and peace of mind i...
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Line 23, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: ain't
.... I look forward to working with u aint he future if need arise Yours Sinc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57297297297 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52753427486 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1574429965 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148027809517 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631387095957 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765272779104 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822975523292 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932329867974 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.