Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by rajujon on Tue, 11/12/2019 - 08:50

In the recent days, all types of pollution are rising above dangerous level, which could be handled only by the intervention of various governmental bodies instead of the citizens. In this essay, relevant arguments and examples will be provided to justify my opinion that pollution can be curbed down only by government.

To begin with, people are very careless and uneducated about the consequences of polluting heavily. People aim to live stress free life by exploiting natural resources to significantly dangerous extent, instead of conserving; moreover, people are least bothered about recycling products in their day to day life. For instance, many people use disposable bags and products, that is made of plastic, which are non-biodegradable objects polluting land and water and therefore posing threat to human and aquatic lives.

Furthermore, the laws and policies set by the government, which are not very strict, are taken for granted by the people exploiting the loopholes in the law and pollute society, though there are a few organizations and welfare groups coming forward to educate people and clean our society. For example, in foreign countries not only that people are fined for polluting land or water, but they are also jailed for breaking their laws and such laws should be imposed in all countries.

To conclude, the Government must enact strict laws and policies to protect the environment from pollution instead of expecting citizens to stop polluting. Only when government step ahead with support of the populace, any country can achieve their dream of a pollution free environment.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33984375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83697843758 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5399319037 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.888888889 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15329156448 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684310987839 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444055507351 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977917976962 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526665694496 0.0609392437508 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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