Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• describe the item
• explain where and when you left it
• say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of a valuable personal item on one of your trains.
The item is a small black leather wallet with the brand name ‘Urban Limit’
embossed on the front. Inside was a library card, a credit card, a swipe card for the
gym, a student I.D. card and my driver’s licence – all in my name. There was also a
little cash: about $25 in all.
I must have lost the wallet between 4.15 pm and 4.30 pm while travelling
southbound on the Wyndham Line on Friday afternoon (15th May). if I recall
correctly, I was in the second carriage sitting near the front.
Could you please let me know if a wallet of this description has been found.
my phone number is 099 304 2442. if you have it, please keep it in a safe place and I
will make arrangements to collect it at your earliest convenience.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Joe black
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report the loss of a val...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Gym
..., a credit card, a swipe card for the gym, a student I.D. card and my driver&apos...
^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Little
...ce – all in my name. There was also a little cash: about 5 in all. I must ha...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Southbound
... 4.15 pm and 4.30 pm while travelling southbound on the Wyndham Line on Friday afternoon...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...dham Line on Friday afternoon 15th May. if I recall correctly, I was in the seco...
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Line 23, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dham Line on Friday afternoon 15th May. if I recall correctly, I was in the seco...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Correctly
...riday afternoon 15th May. if I recall correctly, I was in the second carriage sitting n...
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Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...t of this description has been found. my phone number is 099 304 2442. if you ha...
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Line 33, column 34, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...und. my phone number is 099 304 2442. if you have it, please keep it in a safe p...
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Line 35, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
... please keep it in a safe place and I will make arrangements to collect it at your...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68484848485 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53414515048 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0703825295 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100785008706 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450321279754 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530579227552 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.02701933682 0.12726935374 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349641204516 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.