People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause ? What solution can you suggest ?
Throughout mankind existence history, people have been confronted with many problems because of resisting against making changes. In view of the nature of human, we can see be coded for challenging with changes in process from born to death. In my opinion, resisting making changes causes remaining back from all the life’s opportunities during steps of individual improvement concerning social and business life.
First of all, life pushes you to make changes with society, and you can want to stay in your shell. In this case, you think about how you can continue your social status. This can create stress and pressure to you, but you get used to it within time ıf you intend to remove the prejudices in your mind. Furthermore, even if this adapting process depends on your socio-psychologic compliant ability, you can get support from your family or psychologist.
Secondly, another equally important thing about individual evolving process across avoiding the making changes is to comply with all the development in business life. Companies develop itself significantly with emerging technology and search people who willing to develop yourself and open the changes. Because of this reason, we should not only ready for changes, but also find new approach and perspectives to leave resisting. That’s why, you should find the way that you can motivate yourself and remove your hesitates by attending personal development conference for your anxiety.
In brief, we know that people can experience anxiety and hesitate to make changes in their life normally. To overcome, they should eager to face with this problem and focus to improve and make sense themself about personal development with above arguments. If all the measures suggested above were introduce, we would definitely enjoy a better quality life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in brief, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33910034602 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75932411393 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8653630442 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291758303259 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107942129515 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604152734731 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177309458331 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491893373845 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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