it is important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics?
The imporance of study history and literature which was always debatable has now become more coontoroversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notice. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational . This essay will furher elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this tren d and thus will leads to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate his arguments but the most preponderant one stems form the reveats about ancient culture consequntant gives as information and knowladge of literature books written by renowned authoors for exaple william shakespear. Another pivootal aspect of this trend is that explores the cauntry ,s history and tradititoon.
Elaborating my viewpoint , there are some more demerits but one of the crucial effrcts is that it the school only fows on studing woor three partiwlars subjeets . Hence, it is apparent why are againt favour of this trend.
According to the arguments afoorementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of subjuts oof history and lierature than wathumetics or scince great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35643564356 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90258249287 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688118811881 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3721817075 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12755484081 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406880017441 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041712955509 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647425214301 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401815381495 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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