The greenhouse affects changes the environments
This diagram below presents how the greenhouse affects changes the environments. The two main factors that cause the greenhouse effect increase their activities are the growing of the use of the fossils fuels for industry and transportation, and the cutting down of the forest.
The combustion of the industry and transportations and forest destroyed increase the carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gasses in the atmosphere. The gasses affect the temperatures rise up and then trapped below the atmosphere surface. The heat trapped is re-radiated to the earth surface so that the temperatures of the sea surface leads to increase and then the water is evaporated. The vapor is reflected toward the earth surface and causes the cloud becoming more heat absorbed.
The radiation has global warming impact so that the sea level and the temperatures rise up and the ice melts. Finally, the disaster cannot be avoided by our environments.
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how the greenhouse affects changes the environments.
how the greenhouse affects change the environments.
that cause the greenhouse effect increase their activities
that cause the greenhouse effect increasing their activities
and forest destroyed
and destroyed forest
The gasses affect the temperatures rise up
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
so that the temperatures of the sea surface leads to increase
so that the temperatures of the sea surface leads to the increase
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