The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australiaand France in 1980 and 2000. (Part 1)

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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia
and France in 1980 and 2000. (Part 1)

The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years.

Total electricity production increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia and France. While the totals for both countries were similar, there were big differences in the fuel sources used.

Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity in Australia in 1980, rising to 130 out of 170 units in 2000. By contrast, nuclear power became the most important fuel source in France in 2000, producing almost 75% of the country’s el...

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