The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Some people claim that the rapid pace of life today raises more problems than it solves. However, this statement is untenable. First of all, there is no way for people to count and compare the number of problems it caused and solved. Secondly, highly developed technology does solved more problems than ever before.
To begin with, it is too feeble to draw a conclusion that fast life speed brings more troubles than it solves because it is impossible to count and compare. We do see a lot of problems are raised recently; however, it is not the reason for us to claim that the society today causes more problems. For example, we do know that environmental pollution is a kind of key problem we faced today; however, we cannot totally understand how widely the influence will spread. Otherwise, we will never able to measure and analyze how many problems we solved through only a single piece of technology. For instance, scientists invented the computer to help us calculate and solve some math problems; while this invention was used in each area across every discipline today and it helps almost everyone figuring out problems jumped into mind every day. Therefore, it is almost impossible to state that society today causes more problems than it solves.
Apart from that, the rapid pace today does solve more problems than ever before. Hundreds years ago, human being did not create the transpotation like airplan and ship. It is very inconvenient for people to communicate their idea and exchange information. But in this era, technic makes all these come true. People all around the world can share their knowledge and information, which makes the efficient to exploring scientific puzzles increased dramatically. Accordingly, there is enough reason to let us believe the rapid speed of life can help us solve more problems.
However, some people may state that this highly developed society does bring a lot of problems. It is correct in some degree. However, it is groundless to conclude that it raised more problems than it solves just based on this evidence. We do face more troubles than our ancestors met thousands years ago, but does that mean our society should stop progressing and return back to the life without Internet and cooked food?
To sum up, the statement that the increasingly rapid speed of life today causes more problems than it solves is unfounded because we can never compare the number of problems people solved and caused. Besides, this new life style makes it easier for people to communicate and exchange information. Hence, people will never slow down the speed of developing even though it does cause some problems.
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We do see a lot of problems are raised recently;
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which makes the efficient to exploring scientific puzzles
which makes it efficient to explore scientific puzzles
Sentence: Hundreds years ago, human being did not create the transpotation like airplan and ship.
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Sentence: But in this era, technic makes all these come true.
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There is a conflict between your two ideas:
1. there is no way for people to count and compare the number of problems it caused and solved.
2. highly developed technology does solved more problems than ever before.
The No.2 is against No.1 too.
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