You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement published in The Hindustan times newspaper last week regarding the requirement of teachers for night classes at your college.
I am interested in teaching the students about mathematics at your esteemed institute as it is one of the major subjects which are essential for everyone. I will teach them how to perform calculations using some simple strategies which will help them to solve the problems in a short time. this can be proven to be helpful to the wards at the time of their examinations.
As per my qualification is concerned, I have done my masters in mathematics along with one year diploma covering the techniques used to solve its questions in small interval of time. In addition, I have already worked in a private institute of for about one year where I helped the students to crack their entrance exams, however, presently I am serving as a head of department of maths in the university. Thus, believe that I would be a suitable tutor for the pupils.
I have enclosed all my educational as well as experience credentials as per your request. I hope you will find me to be eligible for this post.
In an appreciation of your prompt reply.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
Ankita Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...jects which are essential for everyone. I will teach them how to perform calculat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... to solve the problems in a short time. this can be proven to be helpful to the ward...
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eply. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Ankita Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8778280543 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91416064448 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0358680527 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217729584216 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790991276978 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558799344271 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111677971871 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051879168634 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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