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some people think that self-employment is better than a job in company or institution.
Discuss both modes of employment and give your opinion.
Owing to the innovations in industries and education system, we can see enormous opportunities for masses to avail. Albeit, their is a debate over this topic whether jobs are better or self employment comes with a huge number of benefits. Here, I would like to throw light on both modes of employment with my own perception.
There are innumerous reasons, why self employment is better over a job. To begin with, the first advantage offers by self employment is growth opportunity. A self employee can take decisions independently regarding his/her firm and can also change policies according to th...
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Sentence: Albeit, their is a debate over this topic whether jobs are better or self employment comes with a huge number of benefits.
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a person do not have to worry
a person does not have to worry
a person get double benefit.
a person gets double benefit.
but it can not gives us contentment
but it can not give us contentment
Sentence: There are innumerous reasons, why self employment is better over a job.
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