The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian man and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph depicts the portion of people who exercised regularly in the year 2010. It is primarily categorized by the age group and then further split into male and female. The data is based on the people of Australia only.
At the lower age groups, there is a clear distinction between the percentage of males and the percentage of females working out. The amount of boys regularly working out is slightly more than the amount of girls, relative to the total amount of boys and girls. Then as we look at the older age groups, there is a noticeable decline in the percentage of male until the age group 45 to 54, after which it starts to rise again. This trend is more or less the opposite of what is happening with the female side of things, in which the numbers rise with age until the very last age group, where there is a slight decline.
Due to the decline in the percentage of male indulging in physical activities, and the surge in the number of females, there is an observable difference in the numbers in the middle age groups. In the case of 25 to 34 year olds, for example, only 42.2 percent of males exercise regularly, compared to 48.9 percent in the case of females. This difference becomes more apparent as the two numbers separate further apart for the age group 35 to 44, wherein the amount of women exercising regularly, is 52.5 percent of the whole, whereas the percentage of men who work out regularly is the lowest for this age group, just 39.5%.
The above pattern continues, until the age group 65 and over, where we see a decline in the percentage for females and a slight increase in the amount of men exercising, thereby closing the gap between the two. However, the portion of women engaging in regular physical activity is still slightly greater compared to the percentage of men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, still, then, whereas, for example, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 326.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60429447853 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45369054949 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463190184049 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 283.868780488 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3176497158 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263314686138 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10008904547 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681911269344 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163914566331 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184001078019 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.