Write a letter to the sport club president about to conduct an event. You are a member of that club.
What is the event?
Whom I am inviting?
What is my role in this?
Dear Mr. Clark
I am a member of Cricket Club of India and writing this letter to inform you about to conduct a prize distribution event in the club. Which will be held on 15 December and on that occasion our club will give honour to the talented sportsmen for their dedication toward game.
As a chief member of that club, providing invitation to guests is mine responsibility so, I would invite chief minister of sports and club's sponsors as a prime guests. We will be gratitude to you if you visit on this event. Players who did best in previous matches are also invited along with their family members.
After the invitation of guests I will look after all the preparation of event like as refreshments and lunch. Moreover, on the day of event, firstly I will give welcome speech in front of all the guest and then announce the name of the prize winners. Afterthat, closing ceremony and thanksgiving lecture will also given by me.
Please inform me if you want to get more
information.
Yours Faithfully
Emily
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...nvited along with their family members. After the invitation of guests I will lo...
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...e inform me if you want to get more information. Yours Faithfully Emily
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...ore information. Yours Faithfully Emily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78888888889 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59807027153 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7117052843 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303529401671 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104276519159 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124605326403 0.0603063233224 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167841220471 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115658624025 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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