Which one do you choose when the child makes a mistake, giving strict rules or let them do whatever they want.

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Which one do you choose when the child makes a mistake, giving strict rules or let them do whatever they want.

Nurturing a child is one of the hardest tasks in family nowadays. People are arguing whether they should have a behavior restriction on their children or just let them decide what is the best for them. In my point of view, i would choose the second though as it will help youngsters to develop their personality trait and confident in positive ways.

The main reason why we should allow our children a free-to-do previlege is because this practice could help to increase their confidence. As a youth is allowed to perform action without punishment in consequence, he is getting a strong believe of his inner power, thereby led him involve to further activities. If this practice could remain in a long term, his personality could be developed to a type namely as "bravery", so

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the best for them. In my point of view, i would choose the second though as it wi...
^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... in consequence, he is getting a strong believe of his inner power, thereby led him inv...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88805970149 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00196712814 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731343283582 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6292302494 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104146844783 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487249195528 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439481948132 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080690794463 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052488754108 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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