Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to express my regrets due to the noises in my house, which is caused by the labours.
My sister has recently delivered a little bundle of happiness and has requested to stay at my place for a few days. For this reason, I have invited some people to set up a nursery for my nephew, not realising it will be so noisy as to disturb the neighbours.
I have requested the labours to work during the morning hours, when all the residents have set off to their work or school. Though it might still disturb the residents who stay at home, I would request to be patient for 3 more days, as the work is nearly complete.
I am again sorry for the trouble caused and invite you to visit my resident next week to visit our new guest. Thank you for your cooperation.
Your sincerely
Farhana Tasneem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your cooperation. Your sincerely Farhana Tasneem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50980392157 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38426857542 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2899427827 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187350115626 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101302983178 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913163671032 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921689219143 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536624659516 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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